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The Seven Deadly Sins:Vanity by ~Nekessla:iconNekessla:



Of the Seven Deadly Sins, 3 of 7

Vanity


Long golden hair,
Wool spun into immeasurable wealth.
Go ahead, touch it.
How could I mind
Such diserved attentions
From someone like you?
Lean in close,
Kiss me deeply --
Watch you don't smudge
My Frosted Ruby lips.
Some people think that
Nine dollars a tube is too expensive.
Don't they know beauty isn't cheap?

Sure, let your hungry eyes roam my body.
Like a starved man, you reach,
You crave.
Touch gently --
I paid a lot for those.
Mind if I dress?
I want to see myself,
See the face in the mirror.
Oh! I moan in my throat.
The face in the mirror!
Such beauty, such refined grace,
I take my breath away.
I could stand here,
Spend endless hours and never tire.
What a view...

No! Don't touch me!
Those soiled hands
On my dress, I'd rather fall over and die.
That I am even gracing your life
With my presence
Should be more than enough for you.
Full lips,
Bright eyes,
Long lashes that curl on their own.
I gasp, I choke up --
Is that a curl out of place?
Tuck it back with crimson, laquered nails.
I am perfection.
Weep at how you look, that you are not me.
A night on the town,
Let the world love me.
One last glance at my own perfection.
I am the fairest one of all.
©2005-2009 ~Nekessla
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Author's Comments

I just want to say, first of all, that this poem, in NO way, reflects how I view myself. It has nothing to do with me! Of all the Seven Deadly Sins I fall prey to, Vanity is NOT it. :p

I just kinda let this one flow. I'm pretty proud of it. Pride is different than vanity, by the way. :p

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Very fitting of its title. You've dealt with the topic very succinctly; and at the beginning it's almost like she adores herself so much that she thinks everyone else should adore her... but by the end she adores herself to the extent that she's too good even to be adored by others.

I'm going to go and have a nosy at your other Deadly Sins!

--
"When men stop believing in God they don't believe in nothing; they believe in anything."

G. K. Chesterton, 1936

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